Monday, March 16, 2009
Careful
The water crashed threateningly below her. A warning. Yet they looked so inviting. Kristin stepped up onto the thin railing carefully. How ironic that now she was being careful. Why couldn't she have thought to do that yesterday? Brad would still be alive. She sighed, looked down at the thundering waves, took a deep breath.
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Great work! "Yet they looked so inviting" was an awesome line to use, because I can really picture that as I read it.
ReplyDeleteIt has that sort of rememberence theme of what happened, and it really gives me a clear image about what happened and what she regrets.